I will be rewriting part of the book starting at the part when Abilene almost got on the train.
Abilene took the train leaving everything behind. Not knowing where to go. She figured maybe she could find Gideon. She then realized everything she had left, she was so starteld that right then right now jumped off the train.
She landed hard on her arm. She unsteadily got up, and started the opposite way of the train. She knew Manifest wasn't too far away, but not sure how close.
After walking awhile she say the old Manifest sign. Then she saw Shady, with a disappointed look on his face. She started slumped over the train tracks to Shady. He the gave her a long scold for leaving and everything that would have happened, and how he was Lucky to catch a glimpse of me or no one would know where Abilene went. She then apologized and her and Shady went home.
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